Natasha
9/10 - Good blog, with detailed notes on what you need to include in your coursework. Have you chosen your website yet? You now need to start analysing it.
Alex
7/10 - You have started to analyse the Dell website, but you need to make sure that you have planned out what you need to cover before you start this. Use the chapter headings in the textbook and write down what you will need to cover for each, just in bullet points.
Abby
8/10 - You have started to plan out what you will include in your coursework, and chosen a website which is good. Your planning could be a little bit more detailed, then you need to start analysing your website.
Emily
8/10 - A good start. Have you chosen your website yet? The planning could be a little bit more detailed, but its generally good.
Liam
7/10 - You have started to look at amazon as your website, and have made a good start. However, you must make sure that your work is planned out before you do this. Use the textbook headings and make bullet points notes showing what you will include in each section.
Sam
9/10 - A good plan for your coursework, that links the textbook to your chosen website. Now you need to start your analysis.
Steph
8/10 - A good plan, although it could be more detailed. I am pleased to see that you have started to analyse your chosen website, it looks good so far.
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